Re: The Sea by Moss |
20-Nov-02/7:02 AM |
I'm liking the bit about the barnacles.
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Re: Time to Kill by Shin-Bojangles |
19-Nov-02/11:11 AM |
priceless. even (dare i say it?)gorptacular. I'm all smiley and stuff. remins me of a Kliban cartoon.
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Re: Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones |
19-Nov-02/11:08 AM |
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Re: Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles |
19-Nov-02/11:07 AM |
are you trying to hint at something, shin?
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Re: Slow death by Blade |
18-Nov-02/6:43 AM |
you know, gouging your eyes out with a slightly tarnished soup spoon is quicker. It`s also less painful for the readers.
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Re: untitled by teacup |
17-Nov-02/6:19 PM |
awww. well at least you don't look like a melting goth.
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Re: my bed by teacup |
17-Nov-02/6:17 PM |
squash. now some bug has an empty bed because his love is gone.
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Re: I Cry by casey |
17-Nov-02/6:15 PM |
"Try to read this to the tune of "I Ran" by Flock of Seagulls! IT ROCKS!!!" so says shin.
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Re: ... by logun2002ya |
14-Nov-02/1:46 PM |
no, no. "what eye feel on paper" implies jabbing the paper directly into the eye.
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Re: a comment on Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit |
13-Nov-02/1:23 PM |
that's actually a pretty amusing comeback.
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Re: a comment on One Country by poetandknowit |
13-Nov-02/9:35 AM |
not my insight. my family's. tell limonade yourself. Don't eat things you find on your shoe, some deep insightful advice from me.
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Re: Tomorrow by joho117 |
13-Nov-02/7:06 AM |
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Re: a comment on Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit |
13-Nov-02/6:55 AM |
I agree with you, kiki.watch out for PAKI, though, as he doesn't take constructive criticism nearly as well as he likes to dish it out. As it stands, the guy's flaming me nonstop, gnawing on my leg like a rabid pit bull. He's sensitive about his poemes, be gentle with them.
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Re: TWO STAR WARS FANS by UAFANTHORPEY |
13-Nov-02/6:47 AM |
I like it. Geeks fall in love too.
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Re: L.O.V.E. by bxjay170 |
13-Nov-02/6:44 AM |
god's wife, you use the term "write" very loosely. I'm guessing english isn't your first language, bxjay.
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Re: Surreal... by Yardbird |
13-Nov-02/6:41 AM |
delightful. reminds me a bit of "sexxodus", which is on this site. I really enjoy this. cupcakes all around.
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Re: a comment on One Country by poetandknowit |
13-Nov-02/6:39 AM |
I don't eat at mickey d's. I appreciate your concern for my cholesterol though, dearie. " Asinine".... you use that word a lot, almost as if you had an unbelievably limited vocabulary. I folllow world affairs when I can, the middle east has held my attention lately, due to the possibility of utter chaos and that I have loved ones there. I am not any less of a person for not feeling much for a lot of dead people, no matter how much you seem to think so. So sweet to worry about my young morality. I truly wish you did have a life, though. You'd be much happier and your cardiovascular system would thank you. Sadly, I have yet to experience much travel, being surprisingly poor. I have a long, promising life ahead to see the world, so I just have something to look forward to. Here's a great big hug just for you. (hug!) have a lovely Kansas City day!:
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Re: One Country by poetandknowit |
12-Nov-02/1:31 PM |
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Re: a comment on One Country by poetandknowit |
12-Nov-02/1:31 PM |
your comment was nothing more than an "off the cuff attack" and irrelevant, therefore I removed it. heartless, yes. Self-pity,angst? none here. You have never been civil. and you know it. I offered no apology save that it' s usually a bad idea to involve those not present and that this little spat you insist on continuing does not really entertain me. All it took was to press the 'dead-momma-button' and you froth at the mouth. dance, puppetanddon'tknowit. Loss of innocent life, eh? honestly I can't say I truly feel for those people, and neither can you, unless you knew them personally. I just don't care. (heartless, remember?) If you don't like my works, that's ok, go back to being all serious and pretentious. Stop bothering me for no reason. learn to spell (guess they didn't teach you how as an undergrad.). You're simply a semi-literate bully who gets his jollies trying to make people online believe that he's intelligent. You're merely a dullard.
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Re: a comment on One Country by poetandknowit |
12-Nov-02/11:54 AM |
arsehole ignored my offer for peace, said shit about me on one of my poems, soo....
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