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Tomorrow (Free verse) by joho117
If you only knew, What tomorrow held in store for you. Would you do unto others, As they do unto you? ... Would you be more cautious Of what you do and say, Or would you continue on Along your merry way? ... Would you take others for granted Or would you hold them near, Tell them that you love them More and more each year? ... If I only knew, What tomorrow would bring. What would I do? I'd live today like a king. ... Knowing what tomorrow would hold, I would risk it all. Just so I could say I gave it my all. ... If we only knew, What tomorrow would hold What would we do different To see how tomorrow would unfold.

Up the ladder: Asthma
Down the ladder: eerie foggy day

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10033
Posted: October 1, 2002 9:03 PM PDT; Last modified: October 1, 2002 9:03 PM PDT
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[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.88 | 13-Nov-02/6:52 AM | Reply
Well, personally, if I had known on the tenth of September last year what was going to happen the day after, there are a number of people I know I would have tried to convince go visit the World Trade Centre...
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.106 | 13-Nov-02/7:06 AM | Reply
me too, bunny.
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