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my bed (Free verse) by teacup my bed used to not be empty.
it used to be warm and inviting.
it used to hold the one I love.
my bed now is not quite empty.
but very much not inviting,
it is now the home of a bug,
someone kill it please.
Up the ladder:
Consider The Dead
Down the ladder:
Glare of Dawn
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Posted: November 16, 2002 7:34 PM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2002 7:34 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11826 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 207.179.152.46
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17-Nov-02/6:17 PM
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squash. now some bug has an empty bed because his love is gone.
the last line ruined it for me, but i was almost there. sorry. 6.
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