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my bed (Free verse) by teacup

my bed used to not be empty. it used to be warm and inviting. it used to hold the one I love. my bed now is not quite empty. but very much not inviting, it is now the home of a bug, someone kill it please.

Bachus 17-Nov-02/9:31 PM
the last line ruined it for me, but i was almost there. sorry. 6.




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