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by logun2002ya

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

eye like to write what eye feel on paper... words are often spoken, but end up merely a vapor... when eye write what eye feel, eye can loose myself in a thought, and come back to view it later... eye like to write what eye feel on paper...

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[0] Tintagiles 14-Nov-02/11:44 AM Reply
What do you feel on paper? Spores? Chip grease? Old semen?
[0] razorgrin 14-Nov-02/1:46 PM Reply
no, no. "what eye feel on paper" implies jabbing the paper directly into the eye.