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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya
eye like to write what eye feel on paper... words are often spoken, but end up merely a vapor... when eye write what eye feel, eye can loose myself in a thought, and come back to view it later... eye like to write what eye feel on paper...

Up the ladder: Missing you
Down the ladder: He Is....

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.2
Weighted score: 4.6662316
Overall Rank: 12243
Posted: November 13, 2002 6:52 PM PST; Last modified: November 13, 2002 6:52 PM PST
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[0] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.3 | 14-Nov-02/11:44 AM | Reply
What do you feel on paper? Spores? Chip grease? Old semen?
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.14 | 14-Nov-02/1:46 PM | Reply
no, no. "what eye feel on paper" implies jabbing the paper directly into the eye.
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