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He Is.... (Free verse) by LovingWhispers
He is alone... Though within a room full of faces.. He is still alone. He is wary... Though he craves those warm embraces He is still wary. He is a light Though he lives in dark shadows He is my light. He is a prisoner Though he runs through meadows He is his own prisoner. He is blind Though he sees right through me He is blind to himself He is damaged Though he has the repairing fee He remains damaged He is in pieces Though he is together He is still a jigsaw puzzle He is not mine Though he is forever He is only dream of mine He is... Himself!

Up the ladder: ...
Down the ladder: LIFE

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.2
Weighted score: 4.6662316
Overall Rank: 12239
Posted: November 26, 2002 2:26 PM PST; Last modified: November 26, 2002 2:26 PM PST
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[3] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 | 26-Nov-02/8:32 PM | Reply
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