| Re: The Abyss of myself by ciantu |
25-Nov-02/6:54 AM |
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| Re: Beginning or End? by xdarkxangelx24 |
25-Nov-02/6:51 AM |
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it's the end. unless you're a pansy horizontally slitting his wrists for attention.
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| Re: Bacchus and the Ivy by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
25-Nov-02/6:49 AM |
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| Re: hallway by blackball |
25-Nov-02/6:33 AM |
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| Re: a comment on All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl |
22-Nov-02/6:39 AM |
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Nice words, but they don't fit together all that well, which is why it feels incoherent and bumpy. I've never been that huge on IP, as a rule. but that's just me.
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| Re: The Autopsy (as shown on Channel Four) by Nicholas Jones |
22-Nov-02/6:19 AM |
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| Re: American Poem by ASTRO-GLIDE |
22-Nov-02/6:17 AM |
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holy crap. this made my bowels hurt. unpleasantly.
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| Re: Damn you, Mary Poppins... by Yardbird |
22-Nov-02/6:12 AM |
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| Re: a comment on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
21-Nov-02/11:14 AM |
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Snuggy-butt, though I am many things, I am not angry. All of my anger is focused on another target, so all everything else gets is my mirth and youthful glee. Limonade says hi, and she misses you.
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| Re: Emptiness by Jagang |
21-Nov-02/11:09 AM |
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but of course they would p&k, as I am beloved and revered by legions!
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| Re: Emptiness by Jagang |
20-Nov-02/1:28 PM |
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I re-read this to see if it was as bad as I remember. yep. you know, if you killed yourself, no one would miss you.
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| Re: a comment on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
20-Nov-02/1:26 PM |
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I haven't given him all 10's though, which you, in your infinite journalist perception, failed to see me announce in my last thingy. I would be the butt of your jokes if you were funny. but you're not. You just keep trying to be witty, condescending and intelligent-sounding, but you always come off sounding like an utter twit. Because you are a smaller-than-a-breadbox ninny, I take no honour that you think you bestow upon me. I'll give limonade your message though, i'm sure you'll warm her heart.
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| Re: a comment on Chuds in the mall by razorgrin |
20-Nov-02/1:15 PM |
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bite me, churlish crab-louse. you're just all pissy because I said your poems are crap. Still as articulate as always, i see.
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| Re: All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl |
20-Nov-02/7:20 AM |
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unpleasantly bumpy rhythm and pretty incoherent too. ick.
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| Re: a comment on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl |
20-Nov-02/7:18 AM |
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"it's good ,really, you just can't read it right!" Please. If you don't want to be critiqued, go to a different website.I hear "grouphugsforpoets.com" is good. Many of your faults have been pointed out. Also, thoughI can't speak for all present, I can honestly say I don't care for you.
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| Re: St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
20-Nov-02/7:09 AM |
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actually, p&k, I haven't given shin all 10s. outside of this artificial environment, i also help edit his other work. Don't assume things, it makes you look foolish.
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| Re: my goat by joey |
20-Nov-02/7:03 AM |
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i like goats. they're cute.
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| Re: The Sea by Moss |
20-Nov-02/7:02 AM |
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I'm liking the bit about the barnacles.
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| Re: Time to Kill by Shin-Bojangles |
19-Nov-02/11:11 AM |
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priceless. even (dare i say it?)gorptacular. I'm all smiley and stuff. remins me of a Kliban cartoon.
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| Re: Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones |
19-Nov-02/11:08 AM |
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