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my goat (Free verse) by joey fly fly fly away
ugly
your pets are annoying
the dog, cat and monkey
they ate my goat
which isnt fair
buy me a new one
with long hair
your mushroom house
with pink spots
what the hell were you playing at
lines and dots??????
you think ur funny
you thing ur smart
but really you have
a killing heart
the moral of this story
which i shall now tell....
dont ever buy goats
they just leave a smell.
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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.8333333
Posted: November 20, 2002 4:49 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2002 4:49 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.686235 Overall Rank: 12088 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180
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20-Nov-02/5:26 AM
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Your poeme is this good: quite
i like goats. they're cute.
Is it an African goat? also, what does "ur" mean. Is that teenage hipster speak.
isn't it like the pre-recorded history source? as in "ur hamlet"?
there were goats in prehistory, right?
I shall ask that on friday. so it is literary hipster speak.
are you saying joey's got a limited vocabulary?
No. Don't bait me. I just want to know what "ur" means.
I want doesn't get.
ur is text language for your!!!
This is simply not true. Goats can be milked and the milk can be made into tasty cheeses.
Starts off good, gets silly (bad silly) very quickly. 132 view(s)
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