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The Sea (Free verse) by Moss
Hours pass alone with the rocks,
and I cover their faces with water.
So many shades of black
slip through my fingers unharmed.
When will you notice the sea edge
is lit like a ghost, and
you hold my fingers too tight to be clean?
The barnacles excite me,
falling into my touch
like white flakes of dust.
I try to wash off your skin
with my mouth, but you sit still
assaulting my hair with your hands
like the wind.
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Weighted score: 6.1666665
Overall Rank: 1025
Posted: November 19, 2002 11:32 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2002 11:32 PM PST
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