| Re: Spring Rolls by Ranger |
5-Apr-03/8:37 AM |
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Ive seen this one before too. it doesnt really speak to me im afraid
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| Re: Beauty, sleeping by Ranger |
5-Apr-03/8:36 AM |
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I have commented on lots of your poems that were similar to these but i see you like to reedit quite a lot and i forget what they were like in the first place! but this is funny and seriously random which is alwayys a good thing! X
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| Re: His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger |
5-Apr-03/8:32 AM |
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| Re: Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
2-Apr-03/1:26 PM |
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Bit strange, at least your work is varied!
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| Re: We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
2-Apr-03/1:23 PM |
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| Re: oh it hurt so much by w~* ATHENA *~w |
2-Apr-03/12:58 PM |
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| Re: Hidden Meaning by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:41 AM |
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Bit diffferent to ur other stuff - wow metaphors and everything- you will become a poet yet oh PBofD! 9
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| Re: Ment to be confusing by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:37 AM |
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Also good - i think your work is very interesting, parts are brilliant, parts shite but definatly lots of potential, makes me feel sad to read them so god knows how u feel
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| Re: Heart Made of Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:34 AM |
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well i like this poem - bit cliched (cant spell) but thats poetry for you - its nice to read someones poetry who seems to have the same problems as me but worse! ;o)
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| Re: Who am I? by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:30 AM |
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Does anyone ever understand anything Daniella says? on the fourth line from the end do you mean hallow or shallow? Its often best not to wonder who-am-i because the answer always seems to be i-am-nothing!
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| Re: Thanks For The Brain Damage by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:24 AM |
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yeah i know what u mean - well metaphorically anyway. Its the way some people can make u feel they often dont realise they are doing it or they do it on purpose because they want to hurt you and it works
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| Re: Night And Day by MuDvAyNe |
16-Mar-03/2:05 PM |
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hahahaha i dont gettit oh well 10 since i give all ur work 10 coz its good
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| Re: Sex by MuDvAyNe |
16-Mar-03/2:03 PM |
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YES! WONDERFUL BRILLIANT I LOVE UR WORK SO MUCH
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| Re: Fate by Dostoyevsky |
16-Mar-03/1:54 PM |
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bit random stamp deary - its all a bit hopeless nowadays huh?
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| Re: Blinded by Dostoyevsky |
13-Mar-03/2:20 PM |
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yay wonderfully good i love it
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| Re: Past by Dostoyevsky |
11-Mar-03/1:46 PM |
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heres a grade coz u have none yet- why dont u re do blinded also- it is one of my favorite poems u know!
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| Re: Past by Dostoyevsky |
13-Feb-03/2:31 PM |
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very lovely i like the wording-i did post that poem i showed u by the way
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| Re: "last needle" by nolan |
12-Feb-03/1:54 PM |
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This is so similar to how i often feel- im amazed
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| Re: a comment on Senses by lunar |
12-Feb-03/1:53 PM |
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I didnt know that- its a fairly common word anywho
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| Re: a comment on Senses by lunar |
12-Feb-03/1:49 PM |
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Hmm good idea i will change it now
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