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Senses (Free verse) by lunar With you in my thoughts,
I can't think, because my mind is full of you.
I look, but cannot see.
I listen, But do not hear.
I speak, but without knowing what it is that i say
I am alive so why can't I live?
Up the ladder:
The lyric of the cabbage
Down the ladder:
Clown of Misery
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Posted: January 29, 2003 2:01 PM PST; Last modified: February 12, 2003 1:52 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1152606 Overall Rank: 5985 Comments:
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Dostoyevsky @ 172.180.234.153
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2-Feb-03/3:10 PM
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but you write of love, and you love Tien so does that make you a hipporite? life isnt a game its a very cruel joke
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god'swife @ 209.179.137.91
> Dostoyevsky
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6-Feb-03/3:05 PM
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Love is a verb. Get that straight and the rest is a cake walk.
as being a somewhat outside obeserver for my time here, seems to me the young and rising children of this site are becoming an ever angering clic against the well placed and comfortably seated old timers from before my time...i suggest a duel. at noon...because as it were, that is as well cliche.
that's funny. everytime you re-edit this some one comes along and goes 0. so 0! chiRPE! i have chirps in my sole, yes a need to chirpe from deep withyne.?
the first line of the last couplet should be the first line of the poem. Then the senses, then the final line. what do you think?
Hmm good idea i will change it now
Senses is the second track off the first New Order album.
I didnt know that- its a fairly common word anywho
Third track actually. I always forget dreams never end.
reminds me of a song which has the line 'im alive i think its time to live', by lifehouse, its great song called trying, and well ike your great poety, well done kat another masterpeice
gr8 chat up line. aah, a love poem, i love you!!!
Hmmm, I'm seeing influence of Simon and Garfunkel...
'People talking without speaking, people listening without hearing' Sound od Silence. 246 view(s)
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