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Senses

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jan 2003 · Edited 12 Feb 2003 · 12 comments

With you in my thoughts, I can't think, because my mind is full of you. I look, but cannot see. I listen, But do not hear. I speak, but without knowing what it is that i say I am alive so why can't I live?

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[10] Dostoyevsky 2-Feb-03/3:10 PM Reply

but you write of love, and you love Tien so does that make you a hipporite? life isnt a game its a very cruel joke

[n/a] god'swife › Dostoyevsky 6-Feb-03/3:05 PM Reply

Love is a verb. Get that straight and the rest is a cake walk.

[n/a] brazen 3-Feb-03/9:29 PM Reply

as being a somewhat outside obeserver for my time here, seems to me the young and rising children of this site are becoming an ever angering clic against the well placed and comfortably seated old timers from before my time...i suggest a duel. at noon...because as it were, that is as well cliche.

[0] Bachus 4-Feb-03/9:04 PM Reply

that's funny. everytime you re-edit this some one comes along and goes 0. so 0! chiRPE! i have chirps in my sole, yes a need to chirpe from deep withyne.?

[n/a] god'swife 11-Feb-03/2:51 PM Reply

the first line of the last couplet should be the first line of the poem. Then the senses, then the final line. what do you think?

[n/a] lunar › god'swife 12-Feb-03/1:49 PM Reply

Hmm good idea i will change it now

[9] TanHand 11-Feb-03/3:43 PM Reply

Senses is the second track off the first New Order album.

[n/a] lunar › TanHand 12-Feb-03/1:53 PM Reply

I didnt know that- its a fairly common word anywho

[9] TanHand › lunar 12-Feb-03/3:42 PM Reply

Third track actually. I always forget dreams never end.

[10] Dostoyevsky 14-Feb-03/11:49 AM Reply

reminds me of a song which has the line 'im alive i think its time to live', by lifehouse, its great song called trying, and well ike your great poety, well done kat another masterpeice

[10] MuDvAyNe 30-Mar-03/1:19 PM Reply

gr8 chat up line. aah, a love poem, i love you!!!

[n/a] cleverdevice 12-Apr-03/1:13 PM Reply

Hmmm, I'm seeing influence of Simon and Garfunkel...
'People talking without speaking, people listening without hearing'
Sound od Silence.