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Senses (Free verse) by lunar

With you in my thoughts, I can't think, because my mind is full of you. I look, but cannot see. I listen, But do not hear. I speak, but without knowing what it is that i say I am alive so why can't I live?

Bachus 4-Feb-03/9:04 PM
that's funny. everytime you re-edit this some one comes along and goes 0. so 0! chiRPE! i have chirps in my sole, yes a need to chirpe from deep withyne.?




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