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Senses (Free verse) by lunar

With you in my thoughts, I can't think, because my mind is full of you. I look, but cannot see. I listen, But do not hear. I speak, but without knowing what it is that i say I am alive so why can't I live?

brazen 3-Feb-03/9:29 PM
as being a somewhat outside obeserver for my time here, seems to me the young and rising children of this site are becoming an ever angering clic against the well placed and comfortably seated old timers from before my time...i suggest a duel. at noon...because as it were, that is as well cliche.




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