Re: When Jesus Found Me by http://mulberryfairy	5-Sep-03/8:49 PM
Amazing. This is a brilliant brilliant piece. I love it. Ten, ten, ten! Remembre, Jesu loves you, this I know, for the Bible tells me so. Why is Christianity labelled monotheistic if they worship a trinity?
Re: Night walker by INTRANSIT	4-Sep-03/6:15 PM
Not bad at'all.
Re: cold sonnet by <~>	4-Sep-03/3:05 PM
beauty.
Re: Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend	4-Sep-03/1:58 PM
I was shocked to see this poem. Shocked that anyone here besides me would know about Porcupine Lake, Dead Man's Point and the Great Fire. I even posted a poem last week (now deleted) that referenced these. And to see a poem with this title... I have often said to my old friends from South End that I want my ashes scattered at Dead Man's Point, on a night when the Northern Lights are snaking through the sky... Aw, the memories of fishing for pike, running the trail, exploring the bush, with my Connaught Hill gang...
Re: Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend	3-Sep-03/8:39 PM
And curse you sir, for writing a better poem. But I am currently reworking mine, and it shall resurface here... Too many similarities... must rewrite... >:/ ten, for splitting my arrow.
Re: Three Brothers by EAger to Offend	3-Sep-03/8:23 PM
Three brothers... hmm... ...who are you?
Re: Burning your desert down by Jeremi B. Handrinos	30-Aug-03/1:45 PM
I am offended by the use of the term "tarantula holes". Remove it immediately. __________8.3
Re: a comment on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub	29-Aug-03/6:33 PM
Come back to us, god'swife! Come back, come back...
Re: a comment on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8	29-Aug-03/4:36 PM
It's not the word itself, it's the hateful and purposefully denigrating way you use it. Not to mention the racist ranting. Yeah, its all a part of the artistic statement that IS Horus8, but its so full of H8. I don't get shocked at a whole lot, but this is purposeful and extended cruelty. I don't use the word, not because it's not allowed, but because I would be furious if someone started calling me the equivalent. But you live on a whole other level. You really live poetry. In comparison, I am a mere dabbler. And tell SupineDreamer or Y3KScamPoet to quit stepping on your coat-tails. Yeah, go ahead and join a neo-nazi group as an anti-PC statement. I'm sure you'll have a real nice life. And I call myself Bill Z. Bub for religous reasons. Or anti-religous reasons.
Re: Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8	28-Aug-03/3:14 PM
But I'm still put off by the use of the N-word. Don't like it.
Re: Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8	28-Aug-03/2:46 PM
I give the first half a ten, the second half a 7. That averages out to 8.5, and I'll round it up to 9.
Re: no name by ~ska~	25-Aug-03/9:33 PM
I refuse to worship the god of Job. And I was going to curse at you, but I realized you're probably just a very young silly person. I have issues. Don't mind me.
Re: Laundry Day by impert&ent	25-Aug-03/8:57 PM
nice and crisp.
Re: My Show at the Whiskey a Go Go on the 26th of August 2003 by Jeremi B. Handrinos	25-Aug-03/7:35 PM
Good luck dude. Sock it to 'em.
Re: deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub	23-Aug-03/6:03 PM
Last night my room-mate punched a raccoon. Life is surreal on the edge between urban and rural.
Re: a comment on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub	23-Aug-03/5:48 PM
Just tell me what I gotta do, my friend.
Re: a comment on fragile by Bill Z Bub	22-Aug-03/8:35 PM
nevermind, it works now.
Re: a comment on D.I.Y.M Syndrome by Rilke4ClosetLesbians	22-Aug-03/11:42 AM
more like :O ;)
Re: Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus	22-Aug-03/11:38 AM
much better
Re: The Waves by Rilke4ClosetLesbians	22-Aug-03/10:11 AM
but there is always distance between bodies. always.