| Re: a comment on water falls by Bill Z Bub |
2-Oct-03/8:18 PM |
I wouldn't say it was easy, and no I cannot teach you how to do anything. I run on pure instinct.
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| Re: a comment on water falls by Bill Z Bub |
2-Oct-03/8:16 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Gone missing by INTRANSIT |
2-Oct-03/8:11 PM |
If you're talking about who I THINK you're talking about, she on a little business trip, and is apparently using a steam powered babbage engine as an internet connection, if I can
judge
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| Re: angst by nentwined |
2-Oct-03/7:55 PM |
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| Re: Gone missing by INTRANSIT |
2-Oct-03/7:37 PM |
first line good
second line, did you mean decent?
third line... er, oooookay... if you say so...?
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| Re: A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
28-Sep-03/5:56 PM |
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Hilarious and somewhat bitter. Ten.
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| Re: (fragment) by razorgrin |
25-Sep-03/11:51 PM |
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I like the rosetta stone metaphor.
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| Re: Ctrl freak (Alt+ version) by <~> |
25-Sep-03/10:26 PM |
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| Re: a comment on minotaur by Bill Z Bub |
23-Sep-03/9:35 AM |
It is a fragment. I plan on expanding it eventually.
The key to the (not really well thought out) metaphor is:
daedalus machine = computer/internet
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| Re: a comment on minotaur by Bill Z Bub |
23-Sep-03/9:32 AM |
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| Re: Madam Z - [<~>] - Snake Pen & Holy Grail by SupremeDreamer |
22-Sep-03/2:59 PM |
Like a headbutt from the lead singer of Insane Clown Posse.
It certainly has my attention, but I wouldn't rate it highly.
Yeshua was complex, and the only harness he wore was of humility, if the old tales can be said to have any truth to them.
Take a nice bath. Try epsom salts. Then have some ice cream. With cherry sauce.
As for those decayed lips, you might want to see a doctor.
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| Re: Love in the Tropics by Fear of Garbage |
21-Sep-03/7:50 PM |
pick up the knife
and cut those ropes
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| Re: Murderers in the Tropics by Fear of Garbage |
21-Sep-03/5:56 AM |
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| Re: a comment on minotaur by Bill Z Bub |
20-Sep-03/5:27 PM |
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| Re: When old men die by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-Sep-03/5:22 AM |
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The rhythm flung me all over the place, but here's an 8 anyway.
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| Re: The Khat by Bachus |
17-Sep-03/9:31 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Upside down and tigers by horus8 |
16-Sep-03/10:47 PM |
I just read "Nicholas Martin" and comments, and ...
...I don't know what to say. You've stunned me. I'm sorry.
This piece is fucking killer. It boils.
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| Re: Upside down and tigers by horus8 |
16-Sep-03/8:54 PM |
You make me mad
with jealousy. Ten.
Ten you bastard.
Ten you olympian brain weaver.
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| Re: Mentor by <~> |
16-Sep-03/8:49 PM |
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I'm trying hard to be impartial... probably not possible. Ten.
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| Re: End of year poem by <~> |
16-Sep-03/8:44 PM |
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