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Mentor (Free verse) by <~>
I have such a time, reconciling you.
You don't look like a listener-
almost within reach,
you never stop at the skin of a word
but ride that instinct through my veins.
There go my knees again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.806824
Overall Rank: 1658
Posted: September 16, 2003 11:53 AM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2003 11:53 AM PDT
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i do not know what they mean when some others use them, but when i use an indent, i use it as a visual clue: hey reader--look this stuff is about the thing it hangs off of.
actually, it is up on another site without the indents, because i misformatted it, and decided to leave it. i think it is subtly different. i also think that the way it appears above is more appropriate to my meaning, oh mysterious one.