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Gone missing (Haiku) by INTRANSIT
She tangoes with words There's no decent way to beg I miss my menses

Up the ladder: "war is in the Air"
Down the ladder: Taste Your Cocky Ego

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10920
Posted: October 2, 2003 6:23 PM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2003 8:05 PM PDT
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[8] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67 | 2-Oct-03/7:37 PM | Reply
first line good
second line, did you mean decent?
third line... er, oooookay... if you say so...?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.14 > Bill Z Bub | 2-Oct-03/8:07 PM | Reply
GAH! I can't believe I did that!!! excuse me while i flog myself repeatedly with a garage door spring.


fixed. where is she, anyway?
[8] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67 > INTRANSIT | 2-Oct-03/8:11 PM | Reply
If you're talking about who I THINK you're talking about, she on a little business trip, and is apparently using a steam powered babbage engine as an internet connection, if I can

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[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.14 > Bill Z Bub | 2-Oct-03/8:14 PM | Reply
from the inventor of the Kale gun. no doubt.
[8] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67 > INTRANSIT | 2-Oct-03/8:24 PM | Reply
No, that would be the cabbage engine, not the babbage engine.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.14 > Bill Z Bub | 2-Oct-03/8:25 PM | Reply
my bad.
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.218 > Bill Z Bub | 2-Oct-03/8:21 PM | Reply
No Z is on a business trip, but not really. She is acting as a middle man (or woman in this case) on a huge opium deal that is going down on the mean streets of south Savannah. I am meeting her for lunch tomorrow in Atlanta. Then we are going to get a room and fuck away the afternoon. I cannot wait. GW was recently kicked out of the country and is living on a small Island off the coast of Ecuador with a gimpy beach boy. As far as Z goes, if she cared at all she would find and Internet café and utilize the advantages 1) of the community gathering, especially listening to young Swedish girls clamoring in their hard boiled language about the weather outside of Amsterdam and 2) utilize modems that actually work.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.14 > poetandknowit | 2-Oct-03/8:23 PM | Reply
well that explains alot. why is it you never seem to show up when I'm writing better stuff?
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.218 > INTRANSIT | 2-Oct-03/8:25 PM | Reply
Are you writing better stuff these days or just odes to GW?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.14 > poetandknowit | 2-Oct-03/8:28 PM | Reply
I think I can handle heavier critiquing on some things. Care to offer?
[8] Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67 > poetandknowit | 2-Oct-03/8:33 PM | Reply
I guess he wasn't talking about who I thought he was talking about.
I just play right into your hands don't I?

You fiend.
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.218 | 2-Oct-03/8:11 PM | Reply
Pervert.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.14 > poetandknowit | 2-Oct-03/8:13 PM | Reply
I suppose there's no hiding it now eh? howaya howaya howaya?
[9] deleted user @ 63.228.147.122 | 3-Oct-03/9:25 AM | Reply
Wonderful! Hey Email me so I can tell you what happened.
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