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Gone missing (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

She tangoes with words There's no decent way to beg I miss my menses

Bill Z Bub 2-Oct-03/7:37 PM
first line good
second line, did you mean decent?
third line... er, oooookay... if you say so...?




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