Comments byBill Z Bub, 241–260 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Immortal Coil by Exiled_humanity 23 May 2003, 12:37 AM
I believe it should be:

*flesh's* fee

*Torn* flesh heals

*life's* dirt

That is all. Go on about your business.
replying on Crowned unkind by Alyssa91 22 May 2003, 3:47 PM
I think the third line should have ended with the word "erection".
replying on missing time by Bill Z Bub 21 May 2003, 6:49 PM
I mean, "Apology accepted, Captain Needa."

(Forgot to stick with the Star Wars quotes.)
replying on missing time by Bill Z Bub 21 May 2003, 6:36 PM
Thanks.
on Activating your Infinity by horus8 21 May 2003, 10:36 AM
Luminous beings are we...not this crude matter.
replying on Activating your Infinity by horus8 21 May 2003, 10:35 AM
Your overconfidence is your weakness.

(note: all my poetry commentary will now come in the form of Star Wars quotes.)
on Milkshake until beef jerky by horus8 21 May 2003, 10:26 AM
(Ahem) Thats nothing compared to the big Crazy Squirrel Syndrome scare we had last year...
on I'm reserved by Alyssa91 21 May 2003, 10:19 AM
You must unlearn what you have learned.
replying on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub 21 May 2003, 10:09 AM
I would, if I had access to a phuqkin scanner. Gaaaaaaaah!
on The Film Epic That Is Blacula by razorgrin 21 May 2003, 10:05 AM
Leonard Maltin is a dork.
on I'm reserved by Alyssa91 20 May 2003, 7:47 PM
yeah?
replying on on missing the bus by Bill Z Bub 20 May 2003, 7:25 PM
Thanks. Can you play "Don't Stop Believin'"? :D
replying on on missing the bus by Bill Z Bub 20 May 2003, 7:07 PM
Yes. (?)
on Dear Lord by simone_girard 20 May 2003, 3:38 PM
For half a second I thought the first line was clever. But then I was sucked into a black hole of insipidness. 0
on Activating your Infinity by horus8 20 May 2003, 3:34 PM
Hell yeah, man. This was a great read. Killer ending. The guy looks like a model and has a supernova mind. I think I'm turning green.
replying on may 18 by Bill Z Bub 20 May 2003, 3:28 PM
Let's find out. I'll take 30 punks and divide them into two groups and... ah, forget it. Of course punks sneer! It's what they do. They sneer.
replying on may 18 by Bill Z Bub 20 May 2003, 3:21 PM
Thanks! Was it really that long ago? It's been less than a year since I discovered this site. You make it sound like I was here before the turn of the century. :-)
replying on on missing the bus by Bill Z Bub 19 May 2003, 7:55 PM
I thank you, and raise a glass of Stella Artois to ya. Cheers.
on My Enemy by tacochick1666 19 May 2003, 7:45 PM
the return of Plasticgirlwithgun?
on The consistency of frailty by INTRANSIT 19 May 2003, 7:39 PM
Proverbs? I'd look that up, but I don't think I have a bible around here. It might give me some insight to this one.
(strange that I don't have a bible, though I HAVE read the entire bible from cover to cover, years ago...)