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Crowned unkind (Free verse) by Alyssa91 When it's cold hold me tight
When it's warm, ask for night
When it's wet give me protection
When i'm lonely, you'll give rejection
And when i'm all at the same time combined
I will feel like I am blind
And then YOU will be crowned unkind
Just trust your heart and soul
And then i can play the beauty role.
But when your heart says no ...
You must still be crowned unkind.
(dedicated to Andrew Taylor)
Up the ladder:
The Captain Plecostumus Rap
Down the ladder:
Never Be
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Posted: May 21, 2003 5:09 PM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2003 5:09 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.970199 Overall Rank: 8411 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.98
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22-May-03/7:05 AM
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I think the world would be a better place if people were kind instead of unkind. What do you think?
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Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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22-May-03/3:47 PM
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I think the third line should have ended with the word "erection".
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