Crowned unkind

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 May 2003 · 2 comments

When it's cold hold me tight When it's warm, ask for night When it's wet give me protection When i'm lonely, you'll give rejection And when i'm all at the same time combined I will feel like I am blind And then YOU will be crowned unkind Just trust your heart and soul And then i can play the beauty role. But when your heart says no ... You must still be crowned unkind. (dedicated to Andrew Taylor)

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-May-03/7:05 AM Reply

I think the world would be a better place if people were kind instead of unkind. What do you think?

[7] Bill Z Bub › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-May-03/3:47 PM Reply

I think the third line should have ended with the word "erection".