on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 8:38 PM
gorgeous
just gorgeous
i have panegyrics
just gorgeous
i have panegyrics
on cold sonnet by <~>
10 Dec 2002, 8:43 PM
more panegyrics
lovely beautiful brilliant
lovely beautiful brilliant
on before I forget by moonUnit
18 Dec 2002, 8:47 PM
quite good.
quite quite good.
I feel all warm and snuggly.
quite quite good.
I feel all warm and snuggly.
on no cure by New Life Drug
18 Dec 2002, 8:55 PM
"there ain't no cure,
there ain't no cure,
there ain't no cure
for love."
-Leonard Cohen
there ain't no cure,
there ain't no cure
for love."
-Leonard Cohen
on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
18 Dec 2002, 6:21 PM
Good revision
on no cure by New Life Drug
18 Dec 2002, 7:05 PM
It went on one stanza too long. And the line "Its a gast of inpossible waves". "inpossible"? thats immcorrect. And what is gast? Otherwise, I love it. (Its very applicable to a current situation I'm in. For that... 99999999999999999999
on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2002, 9:06 PM
reading this is payment enough, isn't it?
what a pantload of self-righteous, smug, childish, ignorant twaddle.
pfui.
what a pantload of self-righteous, smug, childish, ignorant twaddle.
pfui.
on The Fucking Fives by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Dec 2002, 8:11 PM
HA! Grrrreat, joost grrrreat!
on Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart
14 Dec 2002, 8:23 PM
a most annoying reading experience
my fingers hurt from so much scrolling
pah
bug
shvu
madif
my fingers hurt from so much scrolling
pah
bug
shvu
madif
on some deleted poem
14 Dec 2002, 8:30 PM
take the blue pill!!! no, the red pill! no, wait...
on some deleted poem
13 Dec 2002, 7:10 PM
wonderful visions
what if it was
Deganawidahianity?
9999999999999999999999999!
what if it was
Deganawidahianity?
9999999999999999999999999!
on some deleted poem
14 Dec 2002, 8:31 PM
isn't that lurvely
on Cecelia by Nicholas Monson
16 Dec 2002, 4:52 PM
you made me smile.
thanks.
thanks.
on A writers creed by wordsy
17 Dec 2002, 4:53 PM
love the first stanza.
the rest? not so much.
the rest? not so much.
on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT
15 Dec 2002, 6:31 PM
beige and teal? you lost me.
on First Site by angel_uy
14 Dec 2002, 8:06 PM
Blaaaaaargh!
on (Rough Draft) The Adventures of Zoot and Corky by Owner of the Sky
16 Dec 2002, 6:14 PM
Gods, I love the idea of parallel universes...
and remember, the owls are not what they seem!