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The Fucking Fives (Haiku) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
I see you are still not over me giving you all those fucking fives.

Up the ladder: Rented Romance
Down the ladder: Pomona with a best friend

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.7310586
Overall Rank: 1844
Posted: December 14, 2002 7:53 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2002 7:53 PM PST
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[7] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 14-Dec-02/8:11 PM | Reply
HA! Grrrreat, joost grrrreat!
[n/a] SP REYNOLDS @ 216.244.18.71 | 15-Dec-02/3:30 PM | Reply
Five to one, one and five, no one here gets out alive....
[n/a] SP REYNOLDS @ 216.244.18.71 | 15-Dec-02/3:32 PM | Reply
Teh fsirt time I read it I thought it said, "almost lucky chimes"
[n/a] SP REYNOLDS @ 216.244.18.71 | 15-Dec-02/4:51 PM | Reply
Oh well, I can't be bothered, tell him I apologize if you feel like it. Or i'll tell him next time I see him. I just got a handful more if he needs them replaced, tell him I'll bring a bag of cappachino and some wheat bread as well. I didn't realize his "honing the clearity" issue, I'm much younger and "poorer" and give my tylonal away far more graciously. I just happen to have ran out over the past month. I have bigger fish to fry, I may be a new member of the Associated Press. (just kidding all you local yocals in dixie land)but truthful to the god of the vino. Tlk to you soon.
[6] brazen @ 65.237.114.141 | 22-Dec-02/11:27 PM | Reply
if i had the time, i'd try to figure out who is about...or if it is about. what am i talking about?
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > brazen | 23-Dec-02/12:56 PM | Reply
not complicated i've read to many poems here a couple thousand? nah?yeah. that's alot of fives. lol. also i wanted to see if like attract's like (how many fives this'll get) bachus once told me he was amazed to find out how many people wanted to read about fucking cousins and babysitters..i thought interesting. very very interesting the way our minds work.
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