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Rented Romance (Free verse) by OneFingerAnswer Dreamtime Productions presents Lovers in Line
Staring you and wishes to have you be mine
The cast is stellar but the script is the same
And I always find the ending lame
This rented romace leaves me empty at the bone
Always full of the love I want to be shown
I return the tape and pay the late fee
Praying next time nothing awakens me
Up the ladder:
Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck
Down the ladder:
The Fucking Fives
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Posted: July 9, 2002 8:01 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 8:01 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.7310586 Overall Rank: 1843 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.43.235
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9-Jul-02/11:43 PM
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I'll thank you not to describe your revolting pornographic video rental habit on poemeranker. 'tis wickedness.
lmao@Dark_Angel...I had the same thought!. But if ur talking about real people/relationships its a pretty good poem.
I know exactly what you mean.
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