Rented Romance

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

Dreamtime Productions presents Lovers in Line Staring you and wishes to have you be mine The cast is stellar but the script is the same And I always find the ending lame This rented romace leaves me empty at the bone Always full of the love I want to be shown I return the tape and pay the late fee Praying next time nothing awakens me

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jul-02/11:43 PM Reply

I'll thank you not to describe your revolting pornographic video rental habit on poemeranker. 'tis wickedness.

[6] liquidlama 17-Jul-02/12:01 AM Reply

lmao@Dark_Angel...I had the same thought!. But if ur talking about real people/relationships its a pretty good poem.

[7] Venus 9-Aug-02/2:56 PM Reply

I know exactly what you mean.