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Rented Romance (Free verse) by OneFingerAnswer

Dreamtime Productions presents Lovers in Line Staring you and wishes to have you be mine The cast is stellar but the script is the same And I always find the ending lame This rented romace leaves me empty at the bone Always full of the love I want to be shown I return the tape and pay the late fee Praying next time nothing awakens me

liquidlama 17-Jul-02/12:01 AM
lmao@Dark_Angel...I had the same thought!. But if ur talking about real people/relationships its a pretty good poem.




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