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Unjust (Free verse) by angel_uy
Fears are great You meet your fate The lies arise Amongst the cries I look around But hear no sound The raging war Is no more I think we've won It wasn't fun So many gone Its been so long I can not lie I want to die To leave this place With great haste

Up the ladder: a way
Down the ladder: tower of pain

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.25
Weighted score: 4.552989
Overall Rank: 12662
Posted: December 14, 2002 7:18 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2002 7:18 PM PST
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Comments:
[1] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 14-Dec-02/8:07 PM | Reply
uh huh.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Dec-02/8:19 PM | Reply
why do i even choose, because my assistant is a quadropalegic and i am merely a head in a box.
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