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a way (Free verse) by flatliner love and stuff
blow me (away)
rock and roll
carry me (away)
blown off and crazy
drifting (away)
but who cares
any (way).
Up the ladder:
Cherished Childhood
Down the ladder:
Unjust
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Posted: August 4, 2002 6:50 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2002 6:50 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.552989 Overall Rank: 12661 Comments:
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Agemo-Z @ 142.166.108.249
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4-Aug-02/10:17 PM
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I'm not sure if this is clever or... unclever. But you lose points for your lack of capital letters and proper punctuation. 'Cause I'm a dick with that stuff.
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