Ode № 6764

Cherished Childhood

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Jul 2002 · Edited 30 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

My eyes open full, Stretching back until my face reveals my skull. Naked in frostbitten independence. Cursed by my distinguishness. Extorted love engages violently with resentful hearts. Selfish guidance provokes an apprentice's releasing depart. Why you? At a time we were on the same wave. Why me?! Now we clash like sporadic wind patterns amidst the sea. Philosophy ciphers through spiritual erosion, Uncovering the soul that molests my mixed emotions... Fantasias empathy eludes sacrificial sympathy. My father no longer remains a glorified mystery to me.

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[8] horus8 30-Jul-02/7:44 PM Reply

Well i gather now that it is a science...you are passionately versed author.have fun at poemranker. i know what you did last summer. beetle.goose.spit.jeremiah13:7. angelfoodcake. devilled-eggs

[n/a] Sigh'ense... 30-Jul-02/7:50 PM Reply

[n/a] Sigh'ense... 30-Jul-02/7:52 PM Reply

thanks for your support and i can particularly appreciate how you present a dimented saavy about you craft. good luck with your career and family Horus

[n/a] Sigh'ense... 30-Jul-02/7:55 PM Reply

well im out for the week until the next moon, see you soon... i wish we could submit more than 4 poems at a time but im patient. over anxiousness is the death of us all