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Cherished Childhood (Ode) by Sigh'ense...

My eyes open full, Stretching back until my face reveals my skull. Naked in frostbitten independence. Cursed by my distinguishness. Extorted love engages violently with resentful hearts. Selfish guidance provokes an apprentice's releasing depart. Why you? At a time we were on the same wave. Why me?! Now we clash like sporadic wind patterns amidst the sea. Philosophy ciphers through spiritual erosion, Uncovering the soul that molests my mixed emotions... Fantasias empathy eludes sacrificial sympathy. My father no longer remains a glorified mystery to me.

Sigh'ense... 30-Jul-02/7:52 PM
thanks for your support and i can particularly appreciate how you present a dimented saavy about you craft. good luck with your career and family Horus




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