on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT
9 Dec 2002, 10:58 AM
Cool.
on Missing the In-Between by <~>
9 Dec 2002, 11:24 AM
hearty.
on Someone who by Sugarbbybuttrfly
6 Dec 2002, 7:14 PM
in the real time world
beauty and ugly
come wrapped up.
two for one.
our special deal.
one life only.
BTW I like the line "makes love and doesn't screw"
beauty and ugly
come wrapped up.
two for one.
our special deal.
one life only.
BTW I like the line "makes love and doesn't screw"
on Fetish. by Plasticgirlwithgun
6 Dec 2002, 7:25 PM
i think this is your best yet.
on She Puts The Fun In Funeral by David
7 Dec 2002, 11:15 PM
I like it, but it feels unfinished.
on The Poem, The Explanation, The Goodbye by Piano
7 Dec 2002, 8:06 AM
Wow.
on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT
10 Dec 2002, 5:59 PM
On second thought, make mine nine. This one still does it for me.
on some deleted poem
9 Dec 2002, 9:16 AM
By Odin's Beard! Title your poems, man! It's the least you can do! I know it takes some thought, but come on!
If you can't come up with a title, well, you need to rewrite the poem. But aside from that, this is greeting card stuff, ain't it?
If you can't come up with a title, well, you need to rewrite the poem. But aside from that, this is greeting card stuff, ain't it?
on some deleted poem
9 Dec 2002, 9:18 AM
Interesting, but this is actually an ode to Rupert Grint, isn't it?
on How the Mighty Fall by jdsnyd
9 Dec 2002, 11:20 AM
Despite your high-falutin' words, I like it. Yup. I read it aloud and it sounds good to me. Or do I just love my own voice? Who knows.
So olympian, I admire. Now I go back to the cthonic.
So olympian, I admire. Now I go back to the cthonic.
on some deleted poem
9 Dec 2002, 9:32 AM
It wasn't me, it was the wooden armed man!
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 7:21 PM
love it, last line is perfect. what more can i say? i shall rate thee high.
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 7:23 PM
brill-frigging-illiant.
I take my hat off to you sir,
O hatters hare,
you have earned the respect
of the contrary man
adieu
I take my hat off to you sir,
O hatters hare,
you have earned the respect
of the contrary man
adieu
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 7:28 PM
I quite like the middle. The beginning and end have me confused and flustered.
Maybe if I knew what it was about...
Maybe if I knew what it was about...
on Fatty Nerd Trilogy by Agemo-Z
6 Dec 2002, 8:08 PM
cruel intentions
are funny
aren't they?
are funny
aren't they?
on some deleted poem
3 Dec 2002, 10:44 PM
And you're 100% athiest, are you?
on some deleted poem
9 Dec 2002, 9:33 PM
wonderful.
on some deleted poem
8 Dec 2002, 2:14 PM
Well, this gave me a good grin!
Please give it a rewrite or two. I'd love to read it again.
The first stanza is gold. >:-)>
Please give it a rewrite or two. I'd love to read it again.
The first stanza is gold. >:-)>
on Allegheny Winter Lament by jdsnyd
3 Dec 2002, 10:31 PM
For some reason, I love the last line.
"the bastards of creation"
some good stuff here.
"the bastards of creation"
some good stuff here.