Re: Allegheny Winter Lament by jdsnyd	3-Dec-02/10:31 PM
For some reason, I love the last line. "the bastards of creation" some good stuff here.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Dec-02/10:44 PM
And you're 100% athiest, are you?
Re: Someone who by Sugarbbybuttrfly	6-Dec-02/7:14 PM
in the real time world beauty and ugly come wrapped up. two for one. our special deal. one life only. BTW I like the line "makes love and doesn't screw"
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/7:21 PM
love it, last line is perfect. what more can i say? i shall rate thee high.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/7:23 PM
brill-frigging-illiant. I take my hat off to you sir, O hatters hare, you have earned the respect of the contrary man adieu
Re: Fetish. by Plasticgirlwithgun	6-Dec-02/7:25 PM
i think this is your best yet.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/7:28 PM
I quite like the middle. The beginning and end have me confused and flustered. Maybe if I knew what it was about...
Re: Fatty Nerd Trilogy by Agemo-Z	6-Dec-02/8:08 PM
cruel intentions are funny aren't they?
Re: The Poem, The Explanation, The Goodbye by Piano	7-Dec-02/8:06 AM
Wow.
Re: She Puts The Fun In Funeral by David	7-Dec-02/11:15 PM
I like it, but it feels unfinished.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Dec-02/2:14 PM
Well, this gave me a good grin! Please give it a rewrite or two. I'd love to read it again. The first stanza is gold. >:-)>
Re: Untitled by ==Doylum	9-Dec-02/9:12 AM
Firstly, all poems should have titles. A child without a name must not be loved. Secondly, a Haiku NEEDS a title. Without a title, these haikus are meaningless to me. Alas.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Dec-02/9:16 AM
By Odin's Beard! Title your poems, man! It's the least you can do! I know it takes some thought, but come on! If you can't come up with a title, well, you need to rewrite the poem. But aside from that, this is greeting card stuff, ain't it?
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Dec-02/9:18 AM
Interesting, but this is actually an ode to Rupert Grint, isn't it?
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Dec-02/9:32 AM
It wasn't me, it was the wooden armed man!
Re: Panning for gold by INTRANSIT	9-Dec-02/10:58 AM
Cool.
Re: How the Mighty Fall by jdsnyd	9-Dec-02/11:20 AM
Despite your high-falutin' words, I like it. Yup. I read it aloud and it sounds good to me. Or do I just love my own voice? Who knows. So olympian, I admire. Now I go back to the cthonic.
Re: Missing the In-Between by <~>	9-Dec-02/11:24 AM
hearty.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Dec-02/9:33 PM
wonderful.
Re: Check Yourself by INTRANSIT	10-Dec-02/5:59 PM
On second thought, make mine nine. This one still does it for me.