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She Puts The Fun In Funeral (Free verse) by David We stole into the community garden
Ate other peoples produce
She took me to an AA meeting
Smiled and lit everybody's cigarettes
We had no car to drive
She sang 'Oops I Did It Again'
while we waited for the bus
We rode to the Salvation Army food center
Took only oreos and fruit-loops
Up the ladder:
Plastic People
Down the ladder:
Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse)
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Posted: December 7, 2002 3:10 PM PST; Last modified: December 7, 2002 4:07 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.5042653 Overall Rank: 2660 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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7-Dec-02/5:07 PM
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"she wore dresses she could throw away in the morning" larry rivers.
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David @ 209.179.214.64
> Bachus
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9-Dec-02/12:54 PM
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"and now she's very tranquil and she calls the cows by their first name. The moon fascinates her." Henry Miller
if this chicks real she is so cool /9
I like it, but it feels unfinished.
Do you mean I should keep going or give it some kind of moral or something? I have hundreds of memories of her but I don't want to give them all up.
I'm not sure. Not a moral. Maybe slight closure? It needs an ending.
On the other hand, everyone else seems to love it, so what do I know?
Sounds like a nice day out.Asprin protects you.All i got is this ring.IT'S MINE!ALL MINE.YOU WAN'T IT,HAH CAN'T HAVE IT,MINE SEE HAH.THE POWER!GREED,HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
You need aspirin, take two and call me in the morning. That will be $50.00 please. Oh wait, this is a first visit, make that $95.00.
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