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She Puts The Fun In Funeral (Free verse) by David

We stole into the community garden Ate other peoples produce She took me to an AA meeting Smiled and lit everybody's cigarettes We had no car to drive She sang 'Oops I Did It Again' while we waited for the bus We rode to the Salvation Army food center Took only oreos and fruit-loops

Bill Z Bub 9-Dec-02/6:21 PM
I'm not sure. Not a moral. Maybe slight closure? It needs an ending.




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