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Someone who

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Dec 2002 · 4 comments

Someone who makes my heart jump when he comes my way Someone who take me out and says he'll pay Someone who makes love and doesnt screw Someone who cares and will show me what to do Someone to hug and someone to kiss Someone who can show me real true bliss But hes just a figment made up in my mind So all my precious dreams are left behind

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[n/a] Bill Z Bub 6-Dec-02/7:14 PM Reply

in the real time world
beauty and ugly
come wrapped up.
two for one.
our special deal.
one life only.

BTW I like the line "makes love and doesn't screw"

[8] Plasticgirlwithgun 6-Dec-02/8:30 PM Reply

Only if there were realy guys like that...

[8] Plasticgirlwithgun › Plasticgirlwithgun 6-Dec-02/8:30 PM Reply

*real

[1] Agemo-Z 6-Dec-02/8:36 PM Reply

Someone who makes love and doesn't screw? Is that just more of an "in-out" motion or what? Or are we talking tongue here?

"He's" requires an apostraphe in this case, as it is a contraction of "he is".