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Someone who (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly Someone who makes my heart jump
when he comes my way
Someone who take me out
and says he'll pay
Someone who makes love
and doesnt screw
Someone who cares
and will show me what to do
Someone to hug and someone to kiss
Someone who can show me real true bliss
But hes just a figment made up in my mind
So all my precious dreams are left behind
Up the ladder:
Sweet and Sour
Down the ladder:
Only you
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Posted: December 6, 2002 6:22 PM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 6:22 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7913947 Overall Rank: 11220 Comments:
Only if there were realy guys like that...
*real
Someone who makes love and doesn't screw? Is that just more of an "in-out" motion or what? Or are we talking tongue here?
"He's" requires an apostraphe in this case, as it is a contraction of "he is". 143 view(s)
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beauty and ugly
come wrapped up.
two for one.
our special deal.
one life only.
BTW I like the line "makes love and doesn't screw"