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Someone who (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly

Someone who makes my heart jump when he comes my way Someone who take me out and says he'll pay Someone who makes love and doesnt screw Someone who cares and will show me what to do Someone to hug and someone to kiss Someone who can show me real true bliss But hes just a figment made up in my mind So all my precious dreams are left behind

Agemo-Z 6-Dec-02/8:36 PM
Someone who makes love and doesn't screw? Is that just more of an "in-out" motion or what? Or are we talking tongue here?

"He's" requires an apostraphe in this case, as it is a contraction of "he is".




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