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Free verse № 28875

Fetish.

by Plasticgirlwithgun

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Dec 2002 · 9 comments

Take that needle Push it through my skin Make it bleed Make it hurt Put a metal chunk in it Say I look pretty With the little spike In my nose Do it again More metal through my body Make me smile.

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9 comments

[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 6-Dec-02/5:08 PM Reply
Yes! Yes! let me..let me..r
[7] Bill Z Bub 6-Dec-02/7:25 PM Reply
i think this is your best yet.
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun › Bill Z Bub 6-Dec-02/7:44 PM Reply
Why thank you.
[7] Bill Z Bub › Plasticgirlwithgun 6-Dec-02/7:58 PM Reply
" As plain as broth. As wild as rice.
You try so hard but just end up as nice.
I would and I'd; I'd suicide for you.
You shaved your head. You pierced your nose.
You've done it all and all that's left are holes.
You misery. You broken tree.
I'll be the trunk and take the axe."

(lyrics by Martin Tielli, from the album by Nick Buzz)


[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun › Bill Z Bub 6-Dec-02/8:22 PM Reply
"I'd suicide for you."

...doesn't make sense.
[7] Bill Z Bub › Plasticgirlwithgun 6-Dec-02/8:28 PM Reply
it doesn't? its a song, it makes sense in context with the music
when used by a songwriting genius like Martin Tielli.

Ciao.
[n/a] <~> 6-Dec-02/10:10 PM Reply
wait a minute. i didn't know platic bled, plastic girl! are you transforming into metal'n'plastic girl?
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun › <~> 6-Dec-02/11:03 PM Reply
Ha-ha.Uh,I am not actually plastic.It is from a song.Sonic Youth "Plastic Sun"...yeah.
[10] razorgrin 8-Dec-02/2:24 PM Reply
mmm...hot.