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Fetish. (Free verse) by Plasticgirlwithgun Take that needle
Push it through my skin
Make it bleed
Make it hurt
Put a metal chunk in it
Say I look pretty
With the little spike
In my nose
Do it again
More metal through my body
Make me smile.
Up the ladder:
The cowards way out
Down the ladder:
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Posted: December 6, 2002 4:57 PM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 4:57 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.179294 Overall Rank: 4812 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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6-Dec-02/5:08 PM
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Yes! Yes! let me..let me..r
i think this is your best yet.
Why thank you.
" As plain as broth. As wild as rice.
You try so hard but just end up as nice. I would and I'd; I'd suicide for you. You shaved your head. You pierced your nose. You've done it all and all that's left are holes. You misery. You broken tree. I'll be the trunk and take the axe." (lyrics by Martin Tielli, from the album by Nick Buzz)
"I'd suicide for you."
...doesn't make sense.
it doesn't? its a song, it makes sense in context with the music
when used by a songwriting genius like Martin Tielli. Ciao.
wait a minute. i didn't know platic bled, plastic girl! are you transforming into metal'n'plastic girl?
Ha-ha.Uh,I am not actually plastic.It is from a song.Sonic Youth "Plastic Sun"...yeah.
mmm...hot.
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