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Fetish. (Free verse) by Plasticgirlwithgun

Take that needle Push it through my skin Make it bleed Make it hurt Put a metal chunk in it Say I look pretty With the little spike In my nose Do it again More metal through my body Make me smile.

Bill Z Bub 6-Dec-02/7:58 PM
" As plain as broth. As wild as rice.
You try so hard but just end up as nice.
I would and I'd; I'd suicide for you.
You shaved your head. You pierced your nose.
You've done it all and all that's left are holes.
You misery. You broken tree.
I'll be the trunk and take the axe."

(lyrics by Martin Tielli, from the album by Nick Buzz)






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