Comments byBill Z Bub, 401–420 back. Include replies

on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria 27 Nov 2002, 4:56 PM
How unseemly.

Theres some genuine emotion there, but I don't care for the imagery.

Welcome to Life.
on some deleted poem 26 Nov 2002, 10:11 PM
I await more, with interest.
on Devotion by Tyriana 30 Nov 2002, 10:47 PM
And I'm the lamb.
on Libra by Rex Karrs 30 Nov 2002, 10:45 PM
I like, but thats because I'm a Libra...
:^)
on Ponder on Pagan. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 30 Nov 2002, 10:33 PM
For thinking wide and epic and deeply,
I dub thee sir ten
ly.
on some deleted poem 1 Dec 2002, 4:48 PM
Well, these comments certainly were ...
illuminating.
Nine, for the smug and funny and
meaningful line
breaks and some educational comments from all.
on FHjk by Dark Angle 30 Nov 2002, 10:54 PM
brilliant in its simplicity and directness

or not

but what the hell
on some deleted poem 30 Nov 2002, 3:47 PM
a lovely story.
very fine.
here's nine.
on A certain kind of misanthropy. by Plasticgirlwithgun 29 Nov 2002, 8:47 PM
you go grrrl!

that happened to me in high school, girl dumped me for my best friend.
that really really sucks. really really REALLY sucks. Hell, that was a decade ago, and I'm still not over it.

on Life of some girl. by Plasticgirlwithgun 28 Nov 2002, 3:36 PM
Not bad, but somehow I wanted it to rhyme. The fourth line should be
"Black nails on my fist". but thats just me. I like the "Just choke" part.
And the title is good.
on Sociology of Deviance by blackball 28 Nov 2002, 3:39 PM
Really like the ending.
But I'm not sure what its about.
on Drunken note #2 by blackball 28 Nov 2002, 3:55 PM
Well sir, I like it. I certainly do.
on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 4:38 PM
Loved t he first half, right up to "big shot", second half still good, but didn't resonate with me as much. Good work.
on Alone by ThoughtfulSoul 27 Nov 2002, 4:50 PM
i feel sad now.
on some deleted poem 26 Nov 2002, 10:08 PM
It's a little thin, eh?
Needs more details perhaps?
on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 9:19 PM
I really liked this one.
kicked me in the gut.
because I'm feeling that way,
I'll go with an eight.
on some deleted poem 25 Nov 2002, 7:23 PM
Funny and disturbing at the same time.
Is this "found art"? Its so demented, it could be real...
on Cocky by Goose 25 Nov 2002, 7:46 PM
Not bad at all. I like it.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1 Dec 2002, 10:01 AM
<grin>
on Exhaustion by vulcan 27 Nov 2002, 5:02 PM
This does not comply with the dictates of logical poetics.

But seriously, theres something about the word "mistress" that I just don't like. But I was going along with it until the final line.
Maybe if it was made into a Haiku?