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Life of some girl.

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Nov 2002 · 5 comments

Scars on my arm Bracelets on my wrist A ring on my finger Black polish on my nails Words on my hand "Just choke" Hate in my heart This is all I have... All I will ever need.

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[n/a] Bill Z Bub 28-Nov-02/3:36 PM Reply

Not bad, but somehow I wanted it to rhyme. The fourth line should be
"Black nails on my fist". but thats just me. I like the "Just choke" part.
And the title is good.

[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun › Bill Z Bub 28-Nov-02/8:33 PM Reply

Yeah I guess that would sound better.I can't rhyme for shit though.Heh,it is all about me and how fucked up I am.Good day.

[n/a] Bill Z Bub › Plasticgirlwithgun 29-Nov-02/8:57 AM Reply

Well,
Keep writing.

[n/a] wOrnella Mutiw 21-Dec-02/7:49 PM Reply

maybe you should try dipping your hand in sulfuric acid...ssssssss

[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun › wOrnella Mutiw 14-May-03/8:41 PM Reply

Maybe I should ... ssssssss