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The rendition 2 (at the wedding) (Other) by ~incarnate~
Dear Z6 your crave I'll fix asked incarnate who quite irate decided to spill details of Tolkien's will ............................ Oh here cometh Frodo sometimes such a dodo it's a fellowship you idiot! stop being such a faggot! ............................ Then I looketh forth through the veil of years which cate blanchett's character - for the life of me i can't remember her name - let my sight permeate. ............................ And in Haydn's suprise symphony look here comes the ceremony priest: I now will pronounce you wed you can go to be abed pounce on her you lucky dead obviously well read head Tolkien:....... ....... ....... ...... Me: Yes dear priest I thank thee well for your lovely, urging spell me and mine shall sound the knell to show that we fell Nell! Help me please my tolkien's really quite heavy, do take him up to lie in wait ready for his mate. I will not be with that thing even if he doesn't sting I will be in my cold grave 'fore I touch that knave. ...............................

Up the ladder: Life of some girl.
Down the ladder: RIP?

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11293
Posted: December 11, 2002 9:28 AM PST; Last modified: December 11, 2002 9:33 AM PST
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[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 11-Dec-02/9:38 AM | Reply
lord of the ringpiece, frodo is the fudgepacker of dwarves - watch out smurfs
[n/a] ~incarnate~ @ 198.146.137.166 > Caducus | 7-Apr-03/4:54 PM | Reply
I thought he was a hobbit.
[10] Amelia @ 198.146.135.219 | 11-Dec-02/10:45 AM | Reply
Hey, is what the priest saying and what you're saying in some kind of pattern? The count is the same...
And what's the hayden suprise symphony doing there?
[n/a] ~incarnate~ @ 198.146.135.219 > Amelia | 11-Dec-02/10:47 AM | Reply
Yes, the priest and I are singing to the tune of Haydn's symphony that is the second movement. If you noticed too, Tolkien's dots are in the same tune.
[n/a] ~incarnate~ @ 198.146.135.219 > ~incarnate~ | 11-Dec-02/10:51 AM | Reply
Hey aren't you the one that wrote char?
[10] Amelia @ 198.146.135.219 | 11-Dec-02/10:53 AM | Reply
yes. :)
[10] Amelia @ 198.146.135.219 | 11-Dec-02/10:53 AM | Reply
I like your poem it is funny.
[10] Amelia @ 198.146.135.219 | 11-Dec-02/10:54 AM | Reply
Hey where's the will anyway?
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