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Cocky (Free verse) by Goose Mr. Where It's At coming down the street
strutting to the beat of his own tune
a big smile for the world this afternoon
not conceited just convinced
that he has the right stuff
that alone is enough for him to know
He will never sink
someone like him
only knows how to swim
Up the ladder:
Mothers love
Down the ladder:
Things
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Posted: November 25, 2002 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2002 2:13 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.5 Overall Rank: 2686 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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25-Nov-02/7:40 PM
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famous cock leos. sean penn, madonna, napoleon. bill clinton. but jesus christ-off was an sagittarius with almost..soon to be capricorn qualities.
Not bad at all. I like it.
Bachus: Error line 1-'AN Sagittarius' should be 'A Sagittarius'
Decent poem.
nay friend he meant to say "an", dark angel taught him that trick, and he enjoys the twisting of it.
West Side !
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