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Mothers love (Free verse) by kissmeufool58 Snowflakes falling from a beautiful winter sky
As the newborn rubs her gentle little eye
The joyous mother proudly presents her new adored treasure
To everyone she now encounters
Pure love so profound
That she has been waiting so long to be found
Watching and helping her daughter grow
As tears roll down her cheek like so
Many years have now passed by
Will it soon be time to say goodbye?
No matter how far death sets them part
Shall the love and memories remain foever in their hearts
Up the ladder:
Mistaken
Down the ladder:
Cocky
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Posted: July 10, 2002 7:17 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 7:17 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.5 Overall Rank: 2685 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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31-Jul-02/5:48 PM
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children cost between 8-11 grand a year.. sometimes change is good . que no?
Generally I despise this type of hogwash, but this is short enough to be acceptable. If you'd rambled on for much longer in this vein I'd have given you a deserved slating, but have a 3 for not inflicting too much upon me. I don't like the poem much at all though. There's far too much of this melancholy dross being banded about.
good poem, i like it, 8
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