on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>
19 Dec 2002, 7:41 PM
groovadelic
on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 7:26 PM
<scottish accent> Grrrreat title. Grrrrrrrrreat. </scottish accent>
on THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO
19 Dec 2002, 7:38 PM
One problem: trees are not immortal. They just live a really long time. But don't let that stop you, dude. I wouldn't.
on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>
19 Dec 2002, 8:00 PM
its got a beat, you can dance to it,
i give it a top ten, a platinum record,
a million downloads on napster.
booyah grandma, booyah!
i give it a top ten, a platinum record,
a million downloads on napster.
booyah grandma, booyah!
on pee haiku by New Life Drug
19 Dec 2002, 7:50 PM
worthy of a LOL,
but not quite a ROTFLMAO.
IMHO
but not quite a ROTFLMAO.
IMHO
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 9:11 AM
Heh heh.
on new year's eve by razorgrin
1 Jan 2003, 9:12 AM
That happens to me every friggin' year. I never plan ahead.
When will I learn?
When will I learn?
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 4:55 PM
Good God, the cruelty!
on some deleted poem
21 Dec 2002, 11:15 PM
Very much like this.
One thing:
Hang all journalists till their necks crack,
Chop off the hands of the victim who claps,
Sounds better and makes more sense.
One thing:
Hang all journalists till their necks crack,
Chop off the hands of the victim who claps,
Sounds better and makes more sense.
on some deleted poem
21 Dec 2002, 11:18 PM
I like this line:
When you cry do your tears end in your lips?
That's good.
When you cry do your tears end in your lips?
That's good.
on Splendid Discovery by blkarakagain
20 Dec 2002, 5:07 PM
rough, immediate, alive, sensual.
keep going!
keep going!
on Come Back to Me by jlanza
20 Dec 2002, 5:15 PM
ah, young romance.
and I just recieved a letter from my highschool sweetheart!
It all adds up to the divine number 7.
cuz I feel silly and whispy.
and I just recieved a letter from my highschool sweetheart!
It all adds up to the divine number 7.
cuz I feel silly and whispy.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 3:26 PM
Yes, needs some polish, but I love the ideas behind this. Last two lines are great. Encore!
on DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO
19 Dec 2002, 7:36 PM
I counted 20 spelling errors. Do I win a prize? Is he a mad genius or just in need of a spellchecker?
on When Im Gone by New Life Drug
19 Dec 2002, 7:49 PM
Keep working on it. It's starting to shape up nicely.
I love these lines:
"Simply burn the awful words"
"I dare you not to leave my things in the dust"
and
"Oh imagine
The poor furniture"
~sniff~
poor, poor furniture...
I love these lines:
"Simply burn the awful words"
"I dare you not to leave my things in the dust"
and
"Oh imagine
The poor furniture"
~sniff~
poor, poor furniture...
on "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 8:04 PM
"eat my nuts"? I have to listen to that all day at work! I don't want to have to listen to that when I come home to poemranker!
now wheres my dinner? I want kumquats!
now wheres my dinner? I want kumquats!
on Chalk by livingcanvas
19 Dec 2002, 8:23 PM
well.
not bad.
not great, but not bad.
not bad.
not great, but not bad.
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 8:35 AM
mama mia,
cara mia
cara mia
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 8:50 AM
marvelous.
simply marvelous.
I luurve wimmins!
simply marvelous.
I luurve wimmins!