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19-Dec-02/8:50 AM |
marvelous.
simply marvelous.
I luurve wimmins!
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| Re: The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus |
19-Dec-02/7:26 PM |
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<scottish accent> Grrrreat title. Grrrrrrrrreat. </scottish accent>
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| Re: DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO |
19-Dec-02/7:36 PM |
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I counted 20 spelling errors. Do I win a prize? Is he a mad genius or just in need of a spellchecker?
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| Re: THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO |
19-Dec-02/7:38 PM |
One problem: trees are not immortal. They just live a really long time. But don't let that stop you, dude. I wouldn't.
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| Re: At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
19-Dec-02/7:41 PM |
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| Re: When Im Gone by New Life Drug |
19-Dec-02/7:49 PM |
Keep working on it. It's starting to shape up nicely.
I love these lines:
"Simply burn the awful words"
"I dare you not to leave my things in the dust"
and
"Oh imagine
The poor furniture"
~sniff~
poor, poor furniture...
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| Re: pee haiku by New Life Drug |
19-Dec-02/7:50 PM |
worthy of a LOL,
but not quite a ROTFLMAO.
IMHO
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| Re: At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
19-Dec-02/8:00 PM |
its got a beat, you can dance to it,
i give it a top ten, a platinum record,
a million downloads on napster.
booyah grandma, booyah!
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| Re: "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus |
19-Dec-02/8:04 PM |
"eat my nuts"? I have to listen to that all day at work! I don't want to have to listen to that when I come home to poemranker!
now wheres my dinner? I want kumquats!
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| Re: Chalk by livingcanvas |
19-Dec-02/8:23 PM |
well.
not bad.
not great, but not bad.
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20-Dec-02/3:26 PM |
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Yes, needs some polish, but I love the ideas behind this. Last two lines are great. Encore!
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| Re: Splendid Discovery by blkarakagain |
20-Dec-02/5:07 PM |
rough, immediate, alive, sensual.
keep going!
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| Re: Junk by Bonehiss |
20-Dec-02/5:11 PM |
don't let the man get his hands on your junk.
gotta love this piece, 'cuz you've got the funk
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| Re: Come Back to Me by jlanza |
20-Dec-02/5:15 PM |
ah, young romance.
and I just recieved a letter from my highschool sweetheart!
It all adds up to the divine number 7.
cuz I feel silly and whispy.
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21-Dec-02/11:15 PM |
Very much like this.
One thing:
Hang all journalists till their necks crack,
Chop off the hands of the victim who claps,
Sounds better and makes more sense.
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21-Dec-02/11:18 PM |
I like this line:
When you cry do your tears end in your lips?
That's good.
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| Re: new year's eve by razorgrin |
1-Jan-03/9:12 AM |
That happens to me every friggin' year. I never plan ahead.
When will I learn?
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