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THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER (Free verse) by LETO WOULD YOU WISH TO BE
AN ALL IMMORTAL TREE
FOREVER TO SWAY IN THE WIND
AND DRINK FROM THE SKY
THO NEVER TO GROW OLD AND DIE
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Posted: December 19, 2002 3:50 PM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2002 3:50 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.3276463 Overall Rank: 13098 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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19-Dec-02/4:13 PM
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unicorn blood and strudels. no!
One problem: trees are not immortal. They just live a really long time. But don't let that stop you, dude. I wouldn't.
Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-
Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-
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