Re: Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit	3-Feb-03/7:40 AM
OMG.
Re: Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum	5-Feb-03/7:55 AM
Sometimes the stream of consciousness is polluted and all the fishies wash up on the shore.
Re: Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer	5-Feb-03/8:15 AM
Aside from the massacre of the word phoenix, the syllable count is wrong. Still not bad. How about: "when man uses flame to kill a phoenix, he makes his own enemy" or "a new enemy" Either way. Unless you don't care that it's not a Haiku, in which case, it's cool.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Feb-03/2:09 PM
you are special. I give you the highest compliment imaginable: you are a knockoff. "gasp! such high praise!"
Re: Raw boy chiva by horus8	7-Feb-03/2:59 PM
Original as always, falcongod.
Re: the realzz by bxjay170	8-Feb-03/11:53 AM
drow.
Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	17-Feb-03/11:41 AM
brrrrrrrrill.
Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	17-Feb-03/11:42 AM
Oh, you. 9.
Re: Ten new questions from Dan Rather by horus8	28-Feb-03/8:30 PM
love h8 love h8 the massacre was self induced! your mind is a fucking supernova and the lense on my telescope has a scratch right across the middle. punkrock. teeters, William Zanzibar Bubbington
Re: The Feild In Which I Live by Fear of Garbage	28-Feb-03/8:40 PM
i before e. what does it mean? e after i, this poem is fine. in fact i think it may haunt my confined sleep tonight. the mouth on the face of the man spitting blood, breathing life and death by the fence... brrrrrrrrr.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Mar-03/6:00 AM
The last 3 stanzas had me jumping in my chair, shouting YES DAMMIT YES THAT'S IT!
Re: Revelation ( 666 ) by Mr Pig	1-Mar-03/8:19 PM
Bill Z. Bub breaks into song: "666 the Number of the Beast 666 the one for you and me" -Iron Maiden, "The Number of the Beast" Ah, nothing like the classics.
Re: Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos	5-Mar-03/8:19 AM
my guts feel wobbley
Re: The Drunkest ever by horus8	5-Mar-03/8:56 AM
Grimey, like a shuffle in the downtown sludge, open bardoors breathing the stink of liquor and piss and old men, their pockmarcked skin flaking hopeless desire. "Dead is the drunkest that you can get, but I haven't been that drunk yet." -Martin Tielli
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Mar-03/6:18 PM
magnificent. nnnome eeeeeeeeeeeee.ovm. manigtito jahoagme <= having some kind of breakdown, or just tired fingers? \\// //\\ marks the spot where I withered and i think my arm has crumblied and fingers plupped oh deeeee are SNAP! Grrrreat peice. piece. peice. police. peace. police. peace. POLICE! peace. please. peace. TEN
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Mar-03/6:27 PM
i love my love i love lie of i above eye olive live holly my lolly high loaded fried toaded mastered bloated plastered floated moated stoat future coated branches sticking to my sides aaaaaaan rusty chains pushing back us in painted t-shirts grass-stained, omnivorous lovers, whose fingers touching firstly and electrical like black adhesive tape, shiny and sticking blocking i can't breath now screaminnnng flailing for you but you left. long longggggggggleaf fleelleaf leaf feeelfeeelfeel feeel too much ooob bomym mbommyummeemow meemow cast me out you cast me out and i broke
Re: The deafening silence in the world or something by Bachus	7-Mar-03/6:57 PM
you superstar under par jamie farr corca colar one night spent in zanzibar thats whut this generation needs. i fuckinsuck. hypercrit me. Iron maiden rocks the third world. here's ten cents for a new tent, sven.
Re: Unholy War by marvelis	7-Mar-03/7:00 PM
barely... ...nice sentiment, though. THUS SPEAKS THE MAN FROM CANUCKISTAN
Re: if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems	7-Mar-03/7:06 PM
~sigh~ young love and longing, the burning crush of simple incompleteness and a tender lust. and here I am in my cell unbreakable bands of spacetime to overcome in teaspoonfulls. here is a number from a hat.
Re: hehehe by Freethinker1602	7-Mar-03/7:09 PM
blackholes have feelings too. oh, wait, no they don't.