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hehehe (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
Well in life there are several things to learn Things will be a bitch You will fuck up You will fail There's one true way out, but what good does it do to leave others in pain?

Up the ladder: HATE
Down the ladder: A Well Worth Wait

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8421052
Weighted score: 3.8970194
Overall Rank: 13439
Posted: March 7, 2003 1:00 PM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2003 1:00 PM PST
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Comments:
[5] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-Mar-03/2:51 PM | Reply
Are you stupid? Do you hug serial killers too? Perhaps you should take a long look at the ying~yang symbol. THere is no good without something opposite for it to argue it's case to. This has to be the most ironically pointless poem on the planet. Congradulations.
[3] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 7-Mar-03/7:09 PM | Reply
blackholes have feelings too.
oh, wait, no they don't.
[n/a] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 > Bill Z Bub | 7-Mar-03/7:42 PM | Reply
see time and time again I see the only way to truly resolve something is to take the negative force out of the equation. Being evil people should just vanish. It's really the simplest alternative. Plus I wrote this and then I thought. Wow. I don't need to be around people. Huh. Yay. I've left them. yet they still have me
[7] TrulyUnique0642 @ 67.24.137.14 | 8-Mar-03/1:30 PM | Reply
true true
[0] smlink84 @ 68.100.154.95 | 18-Mar-03/6:30 PM | Reply
This is really Wierd and somewhat Sad. Feel's like you have some really dangerous emotions in you heart. Thanks for reading my poems. I never really worked hard on them as I should. I will try on my next poem.
[0] deleted user @ 66.68.184.144 | 25-Mar-03/2:44 PM | Reply
what the ///////////
[n/a] Lord Ganus @ 68.14.26.239 | 12-Apr-03/9:29 PM | Reply
hella lot that's hew motch
[1] baughworm @ 216.196.161.25 | 18-May-03/9:33 PM | Reply
I've heard enough teenage preachiness
[5] PoeTech @ 209.122.235.155 | 20-Jun-03/12:15 PM | Reply
Be sure to read my latest poem - Theology - It's amazing!!
[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.201.42 | 4-Sep-03/5:09 PM | Reply
No good, but it's great fun.
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