| Re: Starving at Tiffany's by horus8 |
24-Jan-03/3:14 PM |
Here's a tongue-twister for ya:
Sven said "Ted,
send ten tents".
Ted said "Sven,
send ten cents".
When Sven sent
Ted ten cents,
Ted sent Sven
ten cent tents.
Try to say that one even once, I dares ya.
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25-Jan-03/7:06 PM |
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| Re: 3.85g by Crakyamuni |
25-Jan-03/7:08 PM |
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liked the first two stanzas, but the second half lost me.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Jan-03/7:27 PM |
As the temporary King of Poemranker (missing time is currently in the #1 spot), I dub thee ...
humourous and odd and brilliant. You bum.
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27-Jan-03/5:49 AM |
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Yummy. Tentententententen!
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| Re: Emergency by Nicholas Jones |
27-Jan-03/5:49 PM |
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Not bad. In fact, I like it. Quite a bit. Very good.
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| Re: Nobody by Nicholas Jones |
27-Jan-03/5:55 PM |
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enjoyable, evocative, and nifty. I saw the lonesome walker.
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| Re: Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
27-Jan-03/6:05 PM |
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| Re: ku-4 by Crakyamuni |
27-Jan-03/9:30 PM |
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"death friends" or "death, friends"? And what's so decent about passion?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Jan-03/9:39 PM |
If you're going to invoke my unholy name, please spell it correctly!
It's either Beelzebub or Bill Z. Bub. And make sure the pentagram is nice and big. And a virgin to "sacrifice" would be nice.
In the future be sure to check your copy of the Dungeons & Dragons Monster Manual for the correct spelling of the names of Demons and Devils.
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27-Jan-03/9:49 PM |
Wow.
Anybody have a gong?
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28-Jan-03/7:10 PM |
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| Re: Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar |
29-Jan-03/6:46 PM |
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| Re: ending by Limness |
29-Jan-03/7:04 PM |
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you will go on a long journey
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| Re: A Puzzling Girl by Imperfections |
29-Jan-03/7:17 PM |
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The second half is excellent.
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29-Jan-03/8:44 PM |
Blub!
Last stanza is magic. mmm.
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| Re: Love by NinjaPoet |
29-Jan-03/9:34 PM |
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nice bit. Is it a poem? Sure, if you say it is. But whats Sturgis?
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| Re: All I Feel by brokenwing |
30-Jan-03/8:03 PM |
I quite like "Your face is gently bathed
in the moons flourescent beams,
and shows no indication
of the content of your dreams."
But you lost me with the awkwardness of
"I have never known such beauty
as the body lying on my bed 3 feet away,
who seems to grow even more so
when touched by the light of day."
How about: "I've never known such beauty
as that which rests 3 feet away.
You seem to grow much more so,
untouched by light of day.
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| Re: The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
2-Feb-03/7:38 PM |
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3-Feb-03/7:08 AM |
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