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A Puzzling Girl (Free verse) by Imperfections All figured out.
Sunday paper
crossword puzzle.
My gestures are clues,
you're filling in
the space
between the lines
I never said
with your assumptions
and my lies.
But you were arrogant
and wrong
and filled the boxes in
with ink,
and now you're frustrated
and trapped
when you can't erase
what you used to think.
Up the ladder:
A hard life
Down the ladder:
The Fire Giver
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Posted: January 28, 2003 9:01 PM PST; Last modified: January 28, 2003 9:01 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0238404 Overall Rank: 7384 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.227
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28-Jan-03/10:11 PM
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A nice concept but I think the overall effort need more thought.
The second half is excellent.
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