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A Puzzling Girl (Free verse) by Imperfections

All figured out. Sunday paper crossword puzzle. My gestures are clues, you're filling in the space between the lines I never said with your assumptions and my lies. But you were arrogant and wrong and filled the boxes in with ink, and now you're frustrated and trapped when you can't erase what you used to think.

poetandknowit 28-Jan-03/10:11 PM
A nice concept but I think the overall effort need more thought.




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