on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 7:37 AM
Mmmmmm.
on nothing, as today by <~>
21 Jan 2003, 1:46 PM
interesting. I know how that goes, I do.
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 1:55 PM
We have some issues, don't we?
on some deleted poem
23 Jan 2003, 1:48 PM
Yes. Yes. Yes!
on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 11:52 AM
Wow. What a fucking waste of time.
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 2:56 PM
Fucking brilliant. 10! But you knew I'd love this, didn't you. How do you write such things as you do?
What I mean to say is that this stunned me to my soul.
Shivering.
What I mean to say is that this stunned me to my soul.
Shivering.
on Afterglow by Imperfections
24 Jan 2003, 3:05 PM
a burning sensation in the thigh region? You should see a doctor.
seriously though, not bad
so far.
seriously though, not bad
so far.
on The Ode that never was by Shardik
24 Jan 2003, 3:09 PM
Neat-O, amusing, different, and worthy. Here's a nine, for the sake of the signs in Morse code.
on The darkest woods ever by Shardik
23 Jan 2003, 1:57 PM
I like the leaves of leather, but it should be SHOULD HAVE, not SHOULD OF.
That is all.
That is all.
on Tree (WARNING: do NOT hug!) by Yardbird
21 Jan 2003, 9:59 AM
The title is better than the body. But I do like the title.
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 11:32 AM
I'm not very good at doing critiques. So here's my favorite number.
on Vulgar peoples by INTRANSIT
20 Jan 2003, 4:48 PM
short and sweet. Just the way I like 'em.
Wondering if it should end on peace?
Not sure.
Wondering if it should end on peace?
Not sure.
on Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus
16 Jan 2003, 8:40 AM
Alah --> Allah
druel --> drool
druel --> drool
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 7:04 PM
You know who cares about your problems less than you do?
EVERYBODY.
That's the only thing I know for certain in this world.
EVERYBODY.
That's the only thing I know for certain in this world.
on Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus
15 Jan 2003, 7:30 PM
wicked, o man. Even the lord of the flies is revolted by these acts. wicked, o poet.
Even a useless shit like me can feel righteous anger. I may be mad, I may be blinded by sadness, but I love this.
Even a useless shit like me can feel righteous anger. I may be mad, I may be blinded by sadness, but I love this.
on Baked Peach Cobbler Windowed by horus8
15 Jan 2003, 5:35 PM
Wow. Obscure, but ...brilliant? There is something here...You mad poet you 123456789strong.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 11:39 PM
Tabernac.
on The man who sold his wife by Bachus
17 Jan 2003, 3:56 PM
My friend, this is brilliant.
on Playing Jerry and crap by w~* ATHENA *~w
14 Jan 2003, 11:44 PM
:-)