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14-Jan-03/11:39 PM |
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| Re: Playing Jerry and crap by w~* ATHENA *~w |
14-Jan-03/11:44 PM |
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| Re: Baked Peach Cobbler Windowed by horus8 |
15-Jan-03/5:35 PM |
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Wow. Obscure, but ...brilliant? There is something here...You mad poet you 123456789strong.
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15-Jan-03/7:04 PM |
You know who cares about your problems less than you do?
EVERYBODY.
That's the only thing I know for certain in this world.
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| Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus |
15-Jan-03/7:30 PM |
wicked, o man. Even the lord of the flies is revolted by these acts. wicked, o poet.
Even a useless shit like me can feel righteous anger. I may be mad, I may be blinded by sadness, but I love this.
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| Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus |
16-Jan-03/8:40 AM |
Alah --> Allah
druel --> drool
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| Re: The man who sold his wife by Bachus |
17-Jan-03/3:56 PM |
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My friend, this is brilliant.
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| Re: Vulgar peoples by INTRANSIT |
20-Jan-03/4:48 PM |
short and sweet. Just the way I like 'em.
Wondering if it should end on peace?
Not sure.
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21-Jan-03/7:37 AM |
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| Re: Tree (WARNING: do NOT hug!) by Yardbird |
21-Jan-03/9:59 AM |
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The title is better than the body. But I do like the title.
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21-Jan-03/11:32 AM |
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I'm not very good at doing critiques. So here's my favorite number.
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| Re: poemrancour by JakeBike |
21-Jan-03/11:52 AM |
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Wow. What a fucking waste of time.
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| Re: nothing, as today by <~> |
21-Jan-03/1:46 PM |
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interesting. I know how that goes, I do.
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21-Jan-03/1:55 PM |
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We have some issues, don't we?
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23-Jan-03/1:48 PM |
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| Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik |
23-Jan-03/1:57 PM |
I like the leaves of leather, but it should be SHOULD HAVE, not SHOULD OF.
That is all.
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| Re: Snowblind by horus8 |
23-Jan-03/2:05 PM |
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24-Jan-03/2:56 PM |
Fucking brilliant. 10! But you knew I'd love this, didn't you. How do you write such things as you do?
What I mean to say is that this stunned me to my soul.
Shivering.
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| Re: Afterglow by Imperfections |
24-Jan-03/3:05 PM |
a burning sensation in the thigh region? You should see a doctor.
seriously though, not bad
so far.
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| Re: The Ode that never was by Shardik |
24-Jan-03/3:09 PM |
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Neat-O, amusing, different, and worthy. Here's a nine, for the sake of the signs in Morse code.
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