on Maliced flame by T'ien
26 Nov 2002, 1:04 AM
Actually, considering the state of mind he's in right now, I think it sums up everything pretty well.
It needs a bit of work, but hey, so does almost everything
It needs a bit of work, but hey, so does almost everything
replying on The North Wind by Ranger
26 Nov 2002, 1:01 AM
Is it a decent hand?
replying on The North Wind by Ranger
25 Nov 2002, 8:15 AM
Hell yeah...kinda. For a wannabe wannabe vampire.
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
25 Nov 2002, 5:12 AM
If 'AIDS in a van' was good, it would be good.
on Sod this! This poem can't rhyme for toffee... by Yardbird
25 Nov 2002, 5:06 AM
Brilliant!
on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird
25 Nov 2002, 5:05 AM
Wonderful fun. Is 'ran my local council up' supposed to be 'rang my local...'? Ok, now I'm nitpicking.
Great fun.
Great fun.
on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird
25 Nov 2002, 5:00 AM
Hee hee hee. You've really outdone yourself this time, Yardbird. Immensely funny, yet a frightening amount of realistic potential
(Don't ask) 10/10
(Don't ask) 10/10
on My world Of Emptiness by abbaslittleclingon
25 Nov 2002, 4:43 AM
I quite like this-it would go well to a Black Sabbath tune (can't remember which one though...) I agree that the first line needs adjusting 8/10
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
25 Nov 2002, 4:32 AM
Has anyone read my last comment re Yardbird (on Childe of my Buttocks)? Please consider it to apply here as well. This is the funniest thing on poemranker and is worthy of a top two place-if not number one.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
25 Nov 2002, 4:26 AM
Hey, I've just had a brilliant idea! Let's all kick Yardbird until he stops spewing crap and appreciates a poem for its content (sorry Rich). Anyway, I don't think it's pretentious, just original. Have you ever considered writing a full length story-perhaps something like Lord of the Haemerrhoid Rings?
on Flamin Monkey's by Blade
25 Nov 2002, 3:50 AM
Shep, is this an attempt at an autobiography? Is it?
on Damn chickens by ciantu
25 Nov 2002, 2:36 AM
What the fuck are you on? I want some too.
on Wave to the starving children Miss Denmark. by horus8
25 Nov 2002, 2:30 AM
Agreed
on suicide lost the plot by T'ien
25 Nov 2002, 2:21 AM
Oh yeah, and 10/10
on suicide lost the plot by T'ien
25 Nov 2002, 2:20 AM
If anyone really needs to know, Lark Angel is Lark Angel and no-one else.
It's a bloody good song, but I thought there was another verse to it last time you showed me, LA. Or is it my memory remembering things that didn't happen?
It's a bloody good song, but I thought there was another verse to it last time you showed me, LA. Or is it my memory remembering things that didn't happen?
Decent poem.