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My world Of Emptiness (Free verse) by abbaslittleclingon
Yesterday all feeling missing
I escaped to a world of emptiness
Hidden from vicious creatures hissing
A distant chant to the beat of a guess
My icy hot chest is more than seared
Chanters keep me hostile guest
This haunted place holds all I feared
The three tongued creature leads the rest
This is where my fears are mirrored
So unreal to people blessed
My eyes are wide with secret tears
As I escape to my world of emptiness.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6841
Posted: November 24, 2002 11:59 PM PST; Last modified: November 24, 2002 11:59 PM PST
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Thanks for the pointers.
abbaslittleclingon